Monday 8 March 2010

You know what...

You know what my bad luck asked to me
How many troubles are in your path can’t you see?

It said, I will fill your life with too many failure
I said, sure, and I will try until your failure...
I said, come on, yeah, let’s play the game
I am true human if you are insane...
Push me and I’ll stand up again
I am ready to tolerate lots of pain...


It said, I’ll hide with painful sufferings all your opportunities
I said, I can find needle in a haystack, then why not opurtunities...
I know dear, oppurtunities do great mischieves
They’ll come from theft door and I’ll seize...


It said, I’ll always find out mistake in anything you act
I said, thanks, practice makes a man perfect...
In this way I’ll do hard work a lot
Because I know life is a whole match, not only one shot...


It said, offcourse, life is not a shot but life is too short
I said, thanks for reminding me, it will make me more fast...
Then I said to myself, get ready
I have to seize the chance...
As the nepoleon hill said, preparation is important
So put on the glance...


It said, are you really not worried to see me,
Or it’s only a show?
I said, no, I am really happy
Because where are my week points, you let me know...
Continuous success can make me arrogant and mad...
But I actually know what I am, when I became sad...


It said, lots of people hate me,
Because I give them pain...
I said, because they don’t know, no pain, no gain...
And I am very thankful to you dear
Because I know that from fire, pure gold never fear...

8 comments:

  1. mujhe aisa kyu lag rha hai , i have read it somewhere ??? whatever, its good one !!!

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  2. ye maine kaafi pehle likhi thi.. ho sakta hai aapko padha di ho aur ye yahoo answers par bhi hai.. mujhe nahi pata ye aapne kahan padhi hai... but ye angreji me likhne ka mera pehla attempt tha... !

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  3. yep !!! i got it ..i read it on yahoo Answers :) ...

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  4. Hi Rashmi,
    It's really nice to see tou write in English. Your this effort may be the first one but has symptoms of original creativity. Dreams soaring so high may take you off to a new height and an open challenge to hurdles may clear the path of success. A good poem - both in structure and thought. Next time be careful to mistakes.

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  5. Hi! I'm quite impressed with your short profile, provided at your blog. You seems to be Big surprise in a small packet.

    Nice poem, Write something in Hindi too.

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  6. Hey, Thanx for visiting my blog and giving your precious comment..
    I do write in Hindi .. Infact this is the first poem in english... Plz visit my other blogs.... I guess you did not visit my full profile yet... :)

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  7. रश्मि जी, देर आयद दुरूस्त आयद। वैसे आपका अंदाजे बयां लाजवाब है।
    इस शमा को जलाएँ रखें।
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    पॉल बाबा की जादुई शक्ति के राज़।
    सावधान, आपकी प्रोफाइल आपके कमेंट्स खा रही है।

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